平和双语英文写作历年原题分析

今天，我要给大家继续分析平和入学考试，英文写作这一单项！我会从试题文章出发，对考查形式和考试要点等方面进行拆解，详细分析平和英语写作的考察要求。

话不多说，我们一起来看原文：

01、Students should be allowed to have a boyfriend or a girlfriend? To what extent do you agree or disagree? Why?

写作难点

1. 清晰的思路。该话题虽然属于社会热点话题，但是从论点上来说，依然属于比较难写的话题之一。所以写之前需要有一个清晰的思路和框架；

2. 根据题目中的要求，该题目难以写正反两面。一边倒的写法，不是很容易写够字数要求；

3. 该话题的专业词汇有限，平常也不经常用英语来讨论此类文章，所以词汇量是难点之一。

写作思路

1.题目中问的是should be allowed。那么，在task response这一点里，就严格要求学生回答should or should not。最好是一边倒的结构，这样能更加切题；

2.这道题大多数人会写不同意，如果我们反向思维写同意观点，可以很容易从人群中突出来，同意的理由则包括：

1）学习有动力

2）培养独立，责任感

关键词汇

培养：Develop, cultivate, foster

培养/保持动力：keep them motivated， be more motivated，become motivated

独立性的培养：development the independence

培养责任心：responsibility is developed

教育家：educationalists

更有效的：more effective

减少分神：reduces distraction

情感上成熟的：emotionally mature

敏感的：sensitive

亲密的：intimate

02、Nowadays, there are many high-techproducts, such as mobile phone, automatic devices. If you have to abandon one of them, which one will you choose to？Why?

写作难点

1.放弃一个高科技产品的好处约等于使用一个高科技产品的坏处。写缺点不容易；

2.科技类写作词汇。

写作思路

1.可以写放弃一个科技产品的缺点，再写其他没有放弃的产品的优点；

2.选择放弃的科技产品的缺点；

3.已经过时了，很多功能被其他产品代替；对人们产生了负面的影响；

4.没有放弃的科技产品的优点；

5.功能更加先进，带来的正面的影响要远大于放弃的这个产品。

关键词汇

高科技: cutting- edge technologies

正面影响：have many positives

负面影响：have many negatives

代替：substitute

过时：obsolete

先进：advanced

拓展知识：broaden their knowledge about

促进大脑发育：boost their brain development

变得更有创造力：become more creative

提高社交能力：Improve their social skills

紧密地合作：work closely with

03、Write a short essay about your viewson western festivals. Should we celebrate western festivals?

写作难点

对西方文化的不熟悉，导致很难写出中西节日文化的对比。

写作思路

从全球化的角度入手，讨论庆祝多文化节日的优点：

1. 现在是全球化的时代，所以我们应该欢迎他国文化；

2. 学习西方文化可以更好的促进与西方文明的交流；

3. 学习西方文化可以更好的帮助我们理解我们自己的文化。

关键词汇

protect their heritage: 保护他们的文化传承

threaten traditional lifestyles 对传统的生活方式构成威胁

are more open-minded  心态更开放

respect cultural differences  尊重文化差异

have more creative ideas 更有创意

have different values and lifestyles 有不同的价值观和生活方式

build understanding and trust 建立理解和相互信任

connect us to the past 帮助我们了解过去

enrich the local culture 丰富当地的文化

contribute to the local economy 为当地的经济做贡献

the expansion of international companies 跨国公司的扩张

04、Now children spend a lot of timeplaying computer games and little time doing sports, why is this? Do you thinkit is a negative or positive development?

写作难点

1.先要讨论这一现象的原因，常识性的话题，往往很难写出具体的原因；

2.讨论利弊的时候，需要直接表达自己的观点，而不是写成两边倒的议论文。

写作思路

1. 学生们主要任务是学习知识，考虑到孩子们的自律性较差，允许孩子们玩游戏容易使他们分散精力，耽误学习；

2. 过度沉迷游戏有害健康，具体而言，玩家会视力下降，养成懒惰和久坐的习惯，导致很多身体健康方面的疾病；

3. 很多游戏里面有少儿不宜的游戏内容。

关键词汇

invariably ensue  接踵而来

conduct anti-social offenses 做出反社会行为

study be delayed 学习被耽误

study efficiency 学习效率

learning-oriented games 以学习为导向的游戏

beneficiary of online games 在线游戏的受益者

adverse impact 负面影响

physically detrimental 有害健康

indulge in games 沉迷游戏

excessive game time 长时间玩游戏

from the perspective of health 从健康角度而言

05 James' classmates laugh at him. Write a mail to comfort him.

写作难点

有时候，不好的事情会发生在我们身上。当我们听闻别人身上发生了不幸的事时，就应该表达我们的同情。当我们想表达自己的担忧时，可能会比较难，但是也不要让自己陷得很突兀。

写作思路

1.先表示自己难过的心情；

2.站在自己的角度去描述被嘲笑的这件事情，其实并不是糟糕的；

3.给予祝福和陪伴。

关键词汇

I'm sorry to hear about 听到......我很难过

please accept my .... 请接受我的.....

that's so sad  这真令人难过

I hope things get better soon  希望一切都会尽快好起来

I hope you feel better soon 希望你尽快好来

Is it better for students learn at homewith easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education, such as TV,self-improvement exercise, and internet?

优秀作文展示

看完原题之后，让我们一起来看一下我们F同学的作文！经过智思的专业训练后，你也可以写出这样的作文呦~

题目：Is it better for students learn at home with easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education, such as TV, self-improvement exercise, and internet?

文章：

It is widely believed that it is better for students to learn at home with easy accessibility to more advanced technologies in education because studying at home with advanced equipment is very convenient to teenagers. Unfortunately, this opinion tells us part of the truth. From my point of view, learning at education institution is more effective to students.

In my first analysis, by face-to-facelearning, students can communicate with the teachers better, which means that they have a good command of knowledge. For example, if the student is confused about points how to calculate the area of a given triangle, he is able to ask the teacher for help in time and the teacher will explain it again. That is to say, the student is more likely to understand the point completely. In addition, when students meet some problems such as how to write the introductory paragraph of an article, he can find the teacher directly and is told that a refined introduction first needs the vivid description of a given phenomenon. Generally speaking, after studying for some time, the students’academic performance ought to be raised.

In my second opinion, through face-to-face communication, students can be administrated by the teacher, which results in that their studying efficiency will be promised. For instance, when it is the time for students to study, the teacher will take their mobile phones away in order to prevent them from playing games. This leads to a result that students will pay more attention to doing homework, reciting words, and writing acomposition. Nevertheless, if the students study at home with advanced facilities, no one can supervise them. That is to say, their learning efficiency is low. As a result, studying at education institution can ensure the learning efficiency.

In a word, based on two reasons I listed above, I consider that it is better for students to study at places like school. For one thing, it can raise their school performance; for another thing, learning efficiency can be guaranteed.

总结

从以上题目以及分析可以看出，题目的形式类似于托福雅思，但是题目的难度、要求、以及考察方向是不同的，比如学校是否可以有男女朋友，这样的题目较多涉及中学的生活学习。但是国际备考涉及到的逻辑思路以及词汇要求是远高于中考作文的。综合来看，备考平和双语学校的写作，需要针对题目进行针对性准备。正确的备考国际学校写作的方法，是应该有目标导向的去学习练习。