雅思那些考官最讨厌的事千万别做

为什么写作分数总是提不上去？

技巧学了不少、华丽词藻也用了好多，但依旧是万年5.5？

很有一种可能就是你的开头段写作出了问题！开头没写好给考官的印象会大打折扣哦！考官连看的兴趣都没有了，给的分数怎么会高呢？如何提高雅思写作技巧，写出满意的雅思作文？下面我们就一起来看一下，小编在授课过程中，从烤鸭们真实写作里搜集到的考官最讨厌的八大开头！

废话连篇

开篇就要主题明了清晰、开门见山、直奔主题，上来就啰啰嗦嗦表达不清，考官自然认为你的观点模糊，甚至不会表达。

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?学生案例：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

明明用一句话就能表达清楚：“In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.”

中式英文

用中式英文开头，不仅会让考官看不懂，还暴露了你的语言功底，语料积累匮乏，是雅思写作中的大忌。

Topic 1: The happiest moment in your life学生案例：In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2: Is there fairness in today’s business world?

学生案例：I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

偏离主题

文不对题，内容和语言写得再好，给考官留下的印象就是跑题，整体写作分数怎么会高呢？

Topic: It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)学生案例：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

过分简单 没有重点

字数太少，基本无实际内容，考官想给你打分都没有内容。所以切记尽量丰富内容，但是也不能为了凑字数照抄题目！

Topic:The importance of environmental protection学生案例：This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

用词不当 表达不准

用词不当不仅会暴露词汇量的有限，而且评分标准中也明确要求“在不同的语境中，使用正确的词汇”。所以在使用词汇的时候，正确性也是非常重要的。如果想要取得更高的分数，那么词汇的多样性也要更多的纳入考虑。切记，不要用口语化的表达！

Topic 1: The importance of confidence学生案例：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

Topic 2：The solution to the traffic problem

学生案例：I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

语法错误不断

雅思写作评分标准中第四项就是考察考试的语法多样性和准确性，语法错误不断自然会成为扣分点。

学生案例：About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility.

意思重复

三四句话反复重复表达一个意思，不仅写作句子之间逻辑性差，同时也会让考官觉得你并没有什么可以表达的。或者词汇表达能力有限，自然也会扣分。

典型案例Topic: Your opinion on DINK families

My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

观点模糊态度暧昧

雅思大作文很重要的一点就是写作的观点和对观点论述的逻辑性，如果观点都不明确，后面的举例证明等都会缺乏说服力，自然分数也不会高。

Topic: Should college students be allowed to get married?学生案例：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

总结

1.开头切记不要用中式英语表达，多积累地道的英语表达；

2.表达的观点要客观明确，切勿模棱两可绝对化；

3.内容要清晰明了，切勿反复啰嗦，也不能一句话代之；

4.注意词性使用，减少语法错误，不要生搬硬套“华丽辞藻”。

总之，在备考雅思写作的时候还是要多多积累丰富的素材，学习地道的语言表达方式，一定要多动手写！！！不断地练习和修改，才能提升雅思写作能力。