Nature of the Problem (18.1%)
▲ It is doubtful that new or useful information will result from the project (14%)
【研究课题不新颖或者没有用】
▲The basic hypothesis is unsound (3.5%)
【基本假设不成立】
▲The proposed research is scientifically premature due to the present inadequacy of supporting knowledge (0.6%)
【据现有知识,研究课题不成熟】
Approach to the Problem (38.9%)
▲ The research plan is nebulous, diffuse and not presented in concrete detail (8.6%)
【研究计划不清楚,没重点】
▲ The planned research is not adequately controlled (3.7%)
【研究计划不可控】
▲ Greater care in planning is needed (25.2%)
1. The research plan has not been carefully designed (11.8%)
【研究计划设计得不严谨】
2. The proposed methods will not yield accurate results (8.8%)
【研究方法不能得出准确的结果】
3. The procedures to be used should be spelled out in more detail (4.6%)
【程序步骤啥的不够详细】
▲ A more thorough statistical treatment is needed (0.7%)
【数据处理不够周密】
▲The proposed tests require more individual subjects than the number given (0.7%)
【试验的个体受试者没有规定的多】
Competence of the Investigators (38.2%)
▲ The applicants need to acquire greater familiarity with the pertinent literature (7.2%)
【申请人对相关的文献不够了解】
▲ The problems to be investigated are more complex than the applicants realize (10.5%)
【研究问题比申请人意识到的要复杂得多】
▲ The applicants propose to enter an area of research for which they are not adequately trained (12.8%)
【申请人打算进入一个没有任何经验的研究领域】
▲ The principal investigator intends to give actual responsibility for the direction of a complex project to an inexperienced co-investigator (0.9%)
【主要研究者选了一个猪一样的队友】
▲The reviewers do not have sufficient confidence in the applicants to approve the present application, largely based on the past efforts of the applicants (6.8%)
【导师不信任申请人有这个能力】
Conditions of the Research Environment (4.8%)
▲ The investigators will be required to devote too much time to teaching or other non-research duties (0.9%)
【研究者不能保证足够的精力投入】
▲ Better liaison is needed with colleagues in collateral disciplines (0.4%)
【没有相关学科同事之间的沟通交流】
▲ Requested expansion on continuation of a currently supported research project would result in failure to achieve the main goal of the work (3.5%)
【对现有研究计划的展开研究有可能会失败】
以上是The National Institute of Health 根据700份Research Proposal得出的数据
还有这几个小错误,记得检查规避一下。
▲ 18% forgot to number the pages【忘记编页码】
▲ 73% forgot to include a table of contents【忘记写目录】
▲ 81% had no abstract【没有摘要】
▲ 20% failed to list the objectives of the project【没有列出研究目标】
以上是The Bureau of Occupational and Vocational Education comparable study根据353份Research Proposal得出的数据
好了,关于 research proposal 这件事儿就说到这里啦。
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